Cause and Effects

 

 

Cause and Effect reports: How did it happen? Or what are the consequences?

Assignment:  Whenever a problem arises at work, the causes and conditions are often discussed.  Many times managers and owners will ask workers to foresee what will be the results of a decision or ask how to avoid the problem in the future.  Thus, this report will focus on a problem that you are working on, i.e., a crashed system or a the lack of time to complete a project or something along that line.  Write a report to your boss discussing a problem. (Feel free to use this as a troubleshooting report for your manual.) Use the information below to help you.***

Cause and effect reports seek to establish a casual relationship between two or more occurrences or facts. This type of evidence relies heavily upon logic and established evidence. In order to convince a discerning audience of your ideas, you must make them believe your chain of evidence. Thus, providing ample and supported evidence is a must. Another point that is important to remember with this type of rhetorical strategy is that you must either focus on causes or effects.

Let's look at an example. Suppose my thesis is "Children watch too much television which causes them to lose their creativity." As a reader, you know that I will be discussing the ways in which T.V. watching causes kids problems. So a schematic of my report would probably look something like this:

 

Causes:
  1. Introduction with thesis
  2. Definition of creativity--How much is too much
  3. T.V. does not require participation which leads to passivity
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  4. T.V. is immediately gratifying
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  5. T.V. stimulates with sound and action bites often with violence
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  6. Conclusion
Effect:

Lack of imagination

Now, let's turn this around and write an report which show the effects only.

Cause:

Watching too much T.V

Effects:
  1. Introduction: Watching too much television effects many areas of a child's life.
  2. Creativity loss
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  3. Passivity
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  4. Impatience
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  5. Violence
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  6. Conclusion

As you can see it is important to choose one place to begin; if you do not, you will lose your audience because they are depending upon your logic and your clear explanations to show why they should believe in the causal relationship you are writing about.

Another type of cause/effect strategy is the causal chain which shows a linked relationship of events: the first event leads to or influences the second, the second leads to or influences the third, etc. Here you still have a clear thesis statement which leads and directs the report; however, instead of three or four items of discussion, as in the example above, you would show the chain of events. A schematic of this type of report it would look like this:

Primary cause Effect 1/Cause 2 Effect 2/Cause 3 Effect 3/Cause 4 Final Effect

Thus if we were using the topic of television watching, our outline would go something like this:

Introduction: Draw a scene showing little Jane and Johnny with dull little faces in front of the boob tube. Thesis: Since television watching leads to a lack of creativity, a child should be limited to one hour per day.
bulletEffect 1/Cause 2--Studies show those who sit in front of the T.V. for hours at a time become passive
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bulletEffect 2/Cause 3--When a person is passive she is more susceptible to images and impulses
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Effect 3/Cause 4--Since a majority of the television shows are about immediate gratification and violent tendencies, the children will be indoctrinated toward that type of expression rather than something which springs from their own imagination.

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bulletFinal Effect: Because children do not use their imagination, when they are challenged to do so, they will be incapable because their "imaginative" ability is stunted.
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Conclusion

Here again you must use evidence to support each of your points or you will lose your audience. I would suggest that you make an outline or schematic before you begin the report, as it will help you when you draw upon the evidence at hand, especially with this assignment. Remember, however, write what you know first, then later you can go back and add evidence from whatever task you are working on. Of course, this presumes that you understand the material. If you do not, please ask questions.

Transition words are imperative in this type of report, as they give cues to your readers and help them follow your train of thought. Here are a few which might be helpful in your report:

as a result,
consequently,
therefore,
because of this,
hence,
since,
leads to,
contributes to,
results in,
causes,
follows from,
is due to,
is a result of,
is a consequence of.

You do not have to limit yourself to these, but these and others should be used to weave your ideas together.

A summary of this handout:

bulletThe rhetorical strategy of cause and effect relies upon logic and evidence;
bulletthree types of organization patterns are available: 1) a few causes leading to one situation, 2) a situation leading to a few effects, 3) the causal chain;
bulletuse a schematic or outline to help with organization;
bullettransition words and phrases should be used throughout the c/e report.

 

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