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The usual way to note the pattern of rhyme at the ends of poetic lines is to use different letters to represent different values in sound, as shown below with the help of color coding.
What groups them? The quatrains use 2 rhymes each in alternating lines. The first quatrain's rhymes are marked in green and red, the second quatrain's in orange and white, the third in aqua and the red for imperfect rhymes. Red, again, marks the imperfect rhyme of the ending couplet. Where do the sentences end? In this sonnet, they end halfway through or at the end of each quatrain. Since the couplet varies the rhyming pattern of the first twelve lines, it stands out; it also stands out because it's the end, the climax emotionally for the poem. So? So the ends of lines 4, 8, 12, and 14 should be louder than other syllables--and filled with relatively more important words. Certainly, "doom" (death) and "loved" are crucial to this sonnet's theme. In short, someone crafting a sonnet will take advantage of typical places of emphasis--like the end of a rhyme, the end of a sentence, and the end of the poem--by putting major hints to the theme or idea of the poem in those positions. The rhymes in these positions heighten the emphasis. |
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