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- Date:
- 10/02/2005
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- Date:
- 02/26/2005
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- Date:
- 11/12/2003
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- Contact_FullName:
- Jan
- Contact_Email:
- jstrever@scc.spokane.edu
- Date:
- 10/09/2003
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- Contact_FullName:
- Matt Hoyt
- Contact_Email:
- matthoyt67@yahoo.com
- Date:
- 10/07/2003
1aWriting email is essential for any class in our time. 2aComputers are our most useful tools in school today. 3aComputers play a very importaant role in school. 4aUnderstanding computers is the most helpful information a student could learn. 5aUsing the internet should be learned in college to be sucessfull. 6a7aThe most popular channel with teens today is MTV. 8aThe X-Files is a popular show with many different people. 10aWriting email is essential for today's human interaction. 11aIt is dangerous for children to use the internet for there are many bad things on it. 12aThesis state ments are the entry into your whole essay. They state where exactly you are standing on th issue at hand. Having a creative and well written thesis statement is essential to any paper.
- Contact_FullName:
- Phyllis Hanes
- Contact_Email:
- hanesphyllis@msn.com
- Date:
- 10/03/2003
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Writing e-mails should be required for college clases 2aNo- Do not state what you will be writing about directly. Do not use pronouns
Computers are important to education and should be used in schools 3aNo- Do not state what you will be writing about directly. No pronouns.
Computers are important to education in this day and age and they should be used in schools. 4aNo- Language not direct enough.
Computer skills should be taught in schools. 5aNo- Take out perhapps and make the statement stronger.
Internet skills should be taught in college. 6aNo- Contains personal opinion
Watching television should not be encouraged 7aNo- States a fact.
Teenagers should watch MTV. 8aNo- States a fact.
People who likw Sci-Fi shows should watch x-files 10aNo- Do not state what you are writing about.
Email should be taught to everyone because it is an important communication tool. 11aNo- Contains personal opinion.
The internet should not be used by children. 12aI understand that a thesis statement is important to an essay.
It gives the reader an indication of what he is going to read about. It helps set the expectations for the rest of the piece.
- Contact_FullName:
- Megan Miller
- Contact_Email:
- jangor@earthlink.net
- Date:
- 10/03/2003
1aWriting email should be required for all classes. 2aThose who like discussing how important computers are in schools, will like this essay. 3aComputers are important in schools 4aUnderstanding computers is important for students. 5aIsomg the internet should be learned in college. 6aWatching television shouldn't be encouraged. 7aMTV is popular with teens. 8aX-Files should be watched by all people. 10aEmail is important. 11aThe internet is a poor instrument for young children to use. 12aI have learned that in order to write a thesis statement you need to have a subject that is arguable, yet you must have none of your own opinions involved. Thesis statements are for helping introduce the reader to what you will be discussing in your paper, but don't confuse them with a topic sentance.
- Contact_FullName:
- Kandice Crowl
- Contact_Email:
- lizzyborden421@aol.com
- Date:
- 10/03/2003
1aWriting email should be required for all classes. 2aThose who like discussing how important computers are in school, will like this essay. 3aComputers are important in school. 4aUnderstanding computers is important for students. 5aUsing the internet should be learned in college. 6aWatching television shouldn't be encouraged by anyone. 7aMTV is popular with teens. 8aEveryone should watch the X-Files. 10aEmail is important. 11aThe internet is a poor instrument for young children to use. 12aA strong thesis should be something that grabs the reader and sucks them into the essay, making them want to know more. It should be strongly worded and arguable, as the whole basis for an essay is to support your ideas and try to prove your point. Without a thesis the reader is lost and doesn't know what they are reading about. Last, but not least, a good strong thesis should never contain matters of opinion or unsupported facts because they aren't arguable. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
- Contact_FullName:
- Megan Miller
- Contact_Email:
- jangor@earthlink.net
- Date:
- 10/03/2003
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- Contact_FullName:
- Tarah Beason
- Contact_Email:
- tarahbear21@yahoo.com
- Date:
- 10/02/2003
1aE-mail is required for some classes. 2aMy paper discusses, how computers are important in the schools. 3aI'm writting a paper on how important, computers are in school. 4aIt's important for students to understand computers. 5aPerhaps, the internet should be tought in college. 6aWatching television shouldn't be incouraged by anyone. 7aMTV, may be popular to some, and not others. 8aMany people watch the X-Files. 10aThe purpose of this paper is to show how important that E-mail is. 11aChildren shouldn't use the internet, it could be bad for thier health. 12a
- Contact_FullName:
- Megan Miller
- Contact_Email:
- jangor@earthlink.net
- Date:
- 10/02/2003
1aThis is true 2aChange the part that says my 3aChange the part that says I am ... 4aTake out the might 5aGet rid of the perhaps 6aThis is debatable 7aTake out the some 8aLooks good to me 10aDon't say the purpose of this paper... 11aThis is arguable 12aI understand that in order to have a thesis statement you need to have an arguable subject. Don't use any words in the first or second person, these are not personal response papers. Don't use words like might, can, etc.
- Contact_FullName:
- Kandice Crowl
- Contact_Email:
- lizzyborden421@aol.com
- Date:
- 10/01/2003
1aThis thesis is direct enough but does not make a statement that can be argued. 2aThis thesis uses first and second person pronouns. 3aThis thesis is wrong because it tells you bluntly what the paper is about rather than making a statement that will be supported in the essay. 4aThis thesis uses fence setting words like "might." It isn't direct enough. 5aThis thesis isn't strong enough because of the "perhaps." This is not a direct enough statement. 6aThis is wrong because it contains a statement of opinion. That doesn't belong in a good thesis. 7aThat is good except it isn't arguable. 8aThat is good but is not arguable. 10aThe thesis is wrong because it states the purpose of the paper without making a direct statement to be later supported in the essay. 11aThe thesis is wrong because it contains matters of opinion and unsupported facts. 12aA strong thesis should be something that grabs the reader and sucks them into the essay, making them want to know more. It should be strongly worded and arguable as the whole basis for an essay is to support your ideas and try to prove your point. Without a thesis the reader is lost and doesn't know what they are reading about. Last, but not least, a good strong thesis should never contain matters of opinion or unsupported facts because they aren't arguable. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
- Contact_FullName:
- Marina Fomichev
- Contact_Email:
- starmarishka@hotmail.com
- Date:
- 10/01/2003
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For some classes, writing email to the teacher is required. 2ano....
In this paper i'll discuss how important coputers are in schools. 3aNo...
In this paper,I am going to write how with computers life in schhol gets easier. 4ano...
For students understanding computers might be important. 5ano...
Learning in college might be easier using the Internet. 6ano...
Watching television is just waisting of time. 7asure... 8asure.... 10aYes...
The purpose of this paper is to inform the reader about how important email is. 11ano...
For health and children's education they should not use internet that much as they do this days. 12aI understand that thesis statements should be in strong language. It should be always personal thoughts.
- Contact_FullName:
- Timothy B Schleufer
- Contact_Email:
- fatmanboogie@hotmail.com
- Date:
- 10/01/2003
1aTeachers have found that requiring students to write email can be beneficial to the learning process. 2aThe benefits and drawbacks of computers in school is a contraversial topic on most college campuses today. 3aComputers are a learning tool used by teachers; their importance to the learning process can often be overlooked. 4aUnderstanding computers is an important skill for students to have. 5aUsing the Internet should be learned in college. 6aWatching television shouldn't be encouraged by anyone. 7aMtv, one of the more popular channels among teens, is often regarded as trash television by adult viewers.
8aConsistently at the top of the television primetime ratings each week the X-Files is a show worth watching. 10aEmail is quickly becoming an important part of our everyday communication. 11aStudies have shown that children who use the internet for their research on a consistent basis are shown to have a lower IQ than that of children who use the library. 12aA thesis statement(explicit) not only lays out the foundation for an essay to be built upon,it also informs the reader of what type of information will be in the text. A weak or broad thesis statement can cause the reader to loose interest before they start the second paragraph; at the same time, having a statement that is to bold or specific can equaly get the same response. Learning to balance the thesis statement as not to offened or bore the reader is the key.
- Contact_FullName:
- Timothy B Schleufer
- Contact_Email:
- fatmanboogie@hotmail.com
- Date:
- 10/01/2003
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- Date:
- 09/30/2003
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- Date:
- 09/29/2003
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