Audience Awareness: Conclusions

Conclusions are as necessary to a piece of writing, as the closing of the door to your apartment when you leave on your journey to school or work each morning. If you did not close your door, or if you shut it without making sure it was securely locked into place, all day long you would probably feel a nagging sensation on the periphery of your awareness. An incomplete conclusion also gives the reader an insistent sense that something isn't quite right. The difference between the two, however, is paramount. You can go back and shut the door, or call someone to do it for you, or if you were fortunate, your roommate locked the door securely before any real damage was done; conclusions, on the other hand, left unfinished stay that way, and readers feel robbed.

There are many ways to conclude a piece of writing. Audience consideration and purpose are two important concerns when searching for the "perfect" end for any piece of writing.

DO:

bullet suggest a solution
bullet recommend a call to action, or a change in attitude
bullet summarize ideas you have conveyed
bullet use a quotation from an authority
bullet make a prediction
bullet create an analogy
bullet log an emotional appeal
bullet delve into the deeper meaning
bullet return to theme
bullet emphatically restate thesis
bullet ask a speculative question(s)
bullet muse on the broader implications
bullet present a challenge
bullet amuse with an anecdote
bullet depict a scene (***especially if you began with one).

DON'T:

bullet write, "In conclusion," or "In summary," (Use these only when writing a formal argumentative essay)
bullet summarize points mechanically
bullet add new information
bullet belittle yourself or the ideas in the essay.

 

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