- Contact_FullName:
- Katherine Solomon
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- cssol@efortress.com
a1
The authour should add some example of what can makeo n laugh here, or so I think.
a2
To make this a thesis the authour needs to use stronger lanuage. ie: instead of "might" us "is", etc.
a3
The author of this thesis needs an opinion or point of view. This is only fact "Computer use is common in schools today because many people feel they are important."
a4
This is not a thesis because it is personalized- the author should take out the I and say: "Computers are important in School"
a5
The author here is using a judgemental statement- stupid. Instead they should right: "Computers shouldn't be used by students."
a6
This statement is fact only. It needs and opinion, ie: "netscape is popular because many people don't like Internet Explorer."
a7
This again is a staement containing only facts. It could be written like: "internet explorer is a useful tool for students."
a8
I believe this staement to be correct. It contains a strong opinion. and all the other crieria needed for a explicit thesis.
a9
This is a fact only statement. It needs an opinion, ie: "Email should be used in traditional classes"
a10
To be a thesis, the author cannot state what his paper is about directly. This statement also needs osme sort of opinion. " People should learn how to use E-mail because the benifits are rewarding."
a11
I was rather confused on what to do on this assignment, I hope I did it right. Perhaps if we had instructions?
- Contact_FullName:
- Heath Wilson
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- hwilson23@hotmail.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer is extremely important for the modern person.
a3
Almost everybody in the schools today are using computers.
a4
Computers are important in schools today, because they help the students achieve success.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students.
a6
Netscape is very popular,being used by over three million people in the U.S.A.
a7
Internet Explorer is a tool for students to expand thier learning.
a8
If you know how to navigate the internet, it will be rewarding and entertaining
a9
Email is used in many traditional classes.
a10
This is how to use Email.
a11
I thought this was good practice.
- Contact_FullName:
- Rich Smith
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- smithc773@hotmail.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many things
a2
Using a computer is important for the modern person
a3
In schools today, the computer is very common
a4
Let me tell you why computers are important in school
a5
Computers are a great tool for students
a6
Netscape is the browser that many people choose to use on their computers
a7
The best tool for students is Internet Explorer
a8
It is rewarding and entertaining knowing how to navigate the internet
a9
Email is used in traditional classes
a10
The purpose of this essay is, how to use e-mail
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Erica Erickson
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- ericksonerica@hotmail.com
a1
Laughing is an enjoyable experience that can be caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer is important for the modern person.
a3
Use of computers in schools today is common for it helps students achieve success.
a4
Computers should be used in the classroom as they are tools that help students achieve success. (I got this from the thesis worksheet)
a5
Computers cause problems and should not be used by students.
a6
Netscape is a program that is becoming more and more popular by computer users.
a7
Internet Explorer is a helpful tool for students and should be used in the classroom.
a8
no change.
a9
The use of email in traditional classes is common and should be used in all classes.
a10
Knowledge of how email works is an important skill to possess and everyone should learn how to use it.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- kristey Danielson
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- wistee@uswest.net
a1
Laughing is caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer is important for the modern person
a3
It is a good thing that computer use is common in schools today.
a4
Computers are the most important teaching aid in school.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students.
a6
Netscape is popular because it is easy to use.
a7
Internet Explorer is a key tool for students.
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internet is very rewarding and entertaining.
a9
It is outlandish that Email is used even in traditional classes.
a10
Everyone should know how to use email.
a11
I think I did this same exercise on Norton today?
- Contact_FullName:
- Kim Stevens
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- turtlebug80@hotmail.com
a1
yes
a2
no i think it should say Using a computer is important for the modern person
a3
yes
a4
no it should say Computers are important in school.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students.
a6
yes
a7
yes
a8
yes
a9
yes
a10
no
???
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Bill O'Dell
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- odell@icehouse.net
a1
A good comedian will get most of his audiance to laugh during his act.
a2
Using a computer is important for the modern person.
a3
Many schools now have computers for their students to use.
a4
Computers are becoming increasingly important to students and should be available for their use in school.
a5
Without proper training, computers are difficult to operate.
a6
An internet browser, such as "Netscape", is needed to "surf" the net.
a7
Internet Explorer is a tool used to by students to gain access to the internet.
a8
correct
a9
Email is gaining popularity in some traditional classes as a means to comunicate between the students and instructors.
a10
Email is an easy way to comunicate with others.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Lindsay Tomsha
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- ltomsha@hotmail.com
a1
correct
a2
A computer is important to any modern person.
a3
correct
a4
Computers are imporant in school.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students.
a6
correct
a7
correct
a8
correct
a9
correct
a10
Using email is an easy process.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Phillip Graham
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- pcegraham@peoplepc.com
a1
Laughter is caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer is important to the modern person.
a3
a4
Computers are important in school.
a5
Computers should not be used by students.
a6
a7
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internet is rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email is used in traditional classes.
a10
Everyone knows how to use email.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Rachel Bradley
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- RMIKE 409
a1
right
a2
wrong
a3
right
a4
wrong
a5
wrong
a6
wrong
a7
right
a8
right
a9
wrong
a10
wrong
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Rich Smith
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- smithc773@hotmail.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many things
a2
Using a computer is important for the modern person
a3
In schools today, computers are a common tool
a4
I want to tell you why computers are are important in school
a5
Computers are overwhelming and should not be used by students
a6
Netscape is a popular browser
a7
The right one
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internetis rewarding and entertaining
a9
Some traditional classes use e-mail
a10
The purpose of this essay is how to use e-mail
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Elise Jamison
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- ejamison69@hotmail.com
a1
Laughter can be caused by many things, and it makes us feel good.
a2
Computers are useful tools, and using a computer is necessary for the modern person.
a3
Computer use is common in schools today, and the children enjoy using them.
a4
In school, computers are an important topic, they give us useful knowledge.
a5
The use of computers is non-productive, and is a stupid tool.
a6
Many people use the program netscape, and it is very popular among it's users.
a7
Internet Explorer is a tool for students, that is found to be very useful.
a8
correct.
a9
Email is used in traditional classes, and the students do not like using it.
a10
Knowing how to use email is important, and this essay is easy to follow.
a11
Why are these thesis statements different from the ones given in class yesterday?
- Contact_FullName:
- Adam Fredrickson
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- snwp2@hotmail.com
a1
a2
Using a computer has become important for the modern person.
a3
a4
I am going to talk about why computers are important in school.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students because they can make for more work.
a6
Netscape is a popular browser people use to navigate the internet.
a7
a8
a9
a10
a11
Good practice. Some Hum-Dinggers in there too.
- Contact_FullName:
- Cory Lynch
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- niro104@hotmail.com
a1
Laughter may be caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer is important for the modern person.
a3
Computer use should be common in schools today.
a4
Why computers are important in school.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students.
a6
Netscape should be popular.
a7
Internet Explorer should be a tool for students.
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internet can be rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email should be used in some traditional classes.
a10
How to use email.
a11
I em having trouble with the hole “can’t be a fact” idea.
- Contact_FullName:
- Maggie Higgins
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- Mags18f@aol.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many things.
a2
For most modern people, using a computer is important.
a3
In many schools today, computer use is common.
a4
Computers are important in school.
a5
Computers are confusing and shouldn't be used in school.
a6
Netscape is a popular browser.
a7
Internet Explorer is a tool that is used by students.
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internet is rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email is used in online classes.
a10
The purpose of this essay is the use of email.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Virginia Lelbach
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- vlelbach@aol.com
a1
Laughing does cause people to relax and have fun.
a2
Computers are important in today technology, everyone should use one.
a3
Computers must be used in schools and should be the main teaching tool for students.
a4
Computers are necessary in schools, students must stay on top of the technological world.
a5
Computers should be banned from schools.
a6
Netscape is popular and is very user friendly.
a7
Internet Explorer can be a useful tool for students.
a8
true thesis statement
a9
Schools today are using Email as a form of communication because students can interact with other people in other countries.
a10
Email is an form of communication and should be used by everyone.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Mary Engel
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- cocopuff52@aol.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many different things.
a2
Using a computer is very important for the modern person.
a3
Computer use is common in schools today.
a4
Computers are a necessary part of the modern day classroom.
a5
Computers should not be used ber students.
a6
Netscape is the most popular tool for Internet use.
a7
Internet Explorer is a very useful tool for students.
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internet is rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email is a widely used means of communication and is even being used in some traditional classes.
a10
Everyone should learn how to use and become comfortable with email.
a11
Thesis statements are very difficult for me and I really don't know why except that I get a mental block concerning them.
- Contact_FullName:
- Mary Engel
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- cocopuff52@aol.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many different things.
a2
Using a computer is very important for the modern person.
a3
Computer use is common in schools today.
a4
Computers are a necessary part of the modern day classroom.
a5
Computers should not be used by students.
a6
Netscape is the most popular tool for Internet use.
a7
Internet Explorer is a very useful tool for students.
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internet is rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email is a widely used means of communication and is even being used in some traditional classes.
a10
Everyone should learn how to use and become comfortable with email.
a11
Thesis statements are very difficult for me and I really don't know why except that I get a mental block concerning them.
- Contact_FullName:
- Cecily Pearson
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- cpearson@yahoo.com
a1
Laughing is a part of human nature so everyone must laugh.
a2
Using a computer must be important for the modern person
a3
Computer use must be common in all schools today.
a4
Students have large amounts of homework so computers must be important in all schools.
a5
Students shouldn't use computers.
a6
Netscape must be considered the most popular internet access point.
a7
All students must use Internet Explorer as a tool.
a8
Navigating the Internet is always rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email must be used in all traditional classes.
a10
Everyone must use email.
a11
"I must learn how to write a thesis better!" Thank you for helping me improve my thesis writing.
- Contact_FullName:
- mike powers
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- myke_po@yahoo.com
a1
yes
a2
no
a3
no
a4
no
a5
no
a6
no
a7
no
a8
yes
a9
no
a10
no
a11
yes
- Contact_FullName:
- jessica tangen
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- jessica_tangen@hotmail.com
a1
no, this is just a fact, without any added opinion.
a2
no, stronger words are needed other than "might be"
a3
this is just a fact, without opinion, but it seems to be better than the other thesis statements.
a4
You shouldn't put "i want to talk...." because you shouldn't use personal pronouns. Also, you aren't supposed to directly state what you are going to be talking about.
a5
using words like "stupid" is not correct and this is only an opinion thesis.
a6
there is no opinion
a7
Compatively this is an acceptable thesis statement, I think.
a8
This is a good thesis statement.
a9
This lacks the opinion part, also, I am not sure this can be categorized under "strong definite language."
a10
This states the subject to obviously, you aren't supposed to directly state "this is what we are going to talk about..."
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- JAMES MADSEN
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- JMADSEN5@USWEST.NET
a1
People should know that laughing can be caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer must be important for the modern person.
a3
People must know that computer use is common in schools today.
a4
Computers are important in school and are welcomed.
a5
Computers shouldn't be used by students.
a6
Netscape is popular and commonly used.
a7
Internet Explorer is a tool for students to help achieve success.
a8
Correct.
a9
People need to know email is used in some traditional classes.
a10
Knowing how to use email is an important way to communicate.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Cathy Bentley
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- CITKAT63@HOTMAIL.COM
a1
Laughing is caused by many things.
a2
Todays modern person must use a computer.
a3
Computer use is necessary in schools today.
a4
Computers are important in school.
a5
Computers are complicated and should not be used by students.
a6
Netscape is widely used by computer users.
a7
a8
Knowing how to navigate the Internetis rewarding and entertaining.
a9
Email is very useful in online classes.
a10
Learning how to use email is vital in todays society.
a11
Finding the right thesis is difficult.
- Contact_FullName:
- Jennifer Hansen
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- Kayleyk112982@cs.com
a1
Comedy movies and comedians are two things that can cause people to laugh.
a2
Computers are helpfull and important for the modern person.
a3
School rely on computers as a important teaching aid.
a4
Computers are important in schools because they teach students about technology and how to use it.
a5
Computers are useless and should not be used in schools.
a6
Netscape is a popular and usefull internet browser.
a7
To navigate the internet student will find that Internet Explorer is helpful and easy.
a8
Correct
a9
Email is used as a usefull communication tool in English and Computer classes.
a10
Students will find email easy to use once they know how to use it.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Jennifer Hansen
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- Kayleyk112982@cs.com
a1
Comedy movies and comedians are two things that can cause people to laugh.
a2
Computers are helpfull and important for the modern person.
a3
Schools rely on computers as a important teaching aid.
a4
Computers are important in schools because they teach students about technology and how to use it.
a5
Computers are useless and should not be used in schools.
a6
Netscape is a popular and usefull internet browser.
a7
To navigate the internet student will find that Internet Explorer is helpful and easy.
a8
Correct
a9
Email is used as a usefull communication tool in English and Computer classes.
a10
Email is becoming a populaer form of communication because it is simple to use.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- Brandon Pratt
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- Patagonia_101@hotmail.com
a1
Laughter is a result of numerous events.
a2
The use of a computer has the ability to bring the modern person up to date with the world today.
a3
The use of computers in schools today is an absolute.
a4
Schools today would not funtion without computers.
a5
Some people feel that computers are a waste of students time.
a6
Many people that use the internet, use Netscape as their browser.
a7
Students can use Internet Explorer as a tool for school.
a8
correct
a9
Not sure what they are trying to get accross in this passage, sorry.
a10
The use of email is important and everybody should know how to opporate it.
a11
- Contact_FullName:
- David Cunnington
- Class:
- Contact_Email:
- dc_18_98@hotmail.com
a1
Laughing is caused by many things.
a2
Using a computer in most cases is important for the modern person.
a3
Computer usage is a lot more common in schools today.
a4
Computers are important to have in schools.
a5
Some feel computers are stupid and shouldn't be used by students.
a6
Netscape is found to be a popular program.
a7
Internet Explorer is a program used by students.
a8
Correct.
a9
Email is often used in some traditional classes.
a10
Easy following step by step directions to learn how to email.
a11