• DON'T:

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    Audience Awareness: Conclusions

    Conclusions are as necessary to a piece of writing, as the closing of the door to your apartment when you leave on your journey to school or work each morning. If you did not close your door, or if you shut it without making sure it was securely locked into place, all day long you would probably feel a nagging sensation on the periphery of your awareness. An incomplete conclusion also gives the reader an insistent sense that something isn't quite right. The difference between the two, however, is paramount. You can go back and shut the door, or call someone to do it for you, or if you were fortunate, your roommate locked the door securely before any real damage was done; conclusions, on the other hand, left unfinished stay that way, and readers feel robbed.

    There are many ways to conclude a piece of writing. Audience consideration and purpose are two important concerns when searching for the "perfect" end for any piece of writing.

    DO:

    suggest a solution
    recommend a call to action, or a change in attitude
    summarize ideas you have conveyed
    use a quotation from an authority
    make a prediction
    create an analogy
    log an emotional appeal
    delve into the deeper meaning
    return to theme
    emphatically restate thesis
    ask a speculative question(s)
    muse on the broader implications
    present a challenge
    amuse with an anecdote
    depict a scene (***especially if you began with one).
    write, "In conclusion," or "In summary," (Use these only when writing a formal argumentative essay)
    summarize points mechanically
    add new information
    belittle yourself or the ideas in the essay.

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