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Contact_FullName: Kamma Fredrickson
Contact_Email: klorett
thesis: Submit Exercise
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Contact_FullName: Robert Lynn`
Contact_Email: baronrob118@cs.com
thesis: Submit Exercise
1a:
Writing email should be required for all classes.
2a:
A great topic us ideas for school reorganization.
3a:
It is important to write about computers and school.
4a:
Understanding computers will be important for students.
5a:
Using the Internet is common today, whereas it was not five years ago.
6a:
Watching television shouldn't be encouraged by anyone.
7a:
MTV is popular with all teens.
7b:
X-Files is a popular show to people.
8a:
Email is important to the modern student.
9a:
Readers of this paper will learn how important email is.
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Correct
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Contact_FullName: Jamie LaBelle
Contact_Email: j1walker@netzero.net labj300@dshs.wa.gov
thesis: Submit Exercise
1a:
Writing email is required for online courses and will help improve your communication skills.
2a:
Reorganizing the public school system by offering vouchers for all students will allow all children equal access to a quality education.
3a:
Computers are important in school as they allow students the flexibility to research and compose their papers in one location.
4a:
All facets of our lives are impacted by computers so computer education must be taught to students beginning in elementary school.
5a:
Internet usage is commonplace today compared to five years ago because colleges have began teaching classes in this format.
6a:
Too much television watching can lead to poor physical condition of the viewer and should be discouraged.
7a:
The latest music and information about popular musicians makes MTV popular with teens.
7b:
Curiousity about the super-natural intrigues the many people who watch X-Files.
8a:
Correct
9a:
In the computer era of today, email is an important and quick way to communicate.
10a:
Games played on the Internet can become addictive to children causing them to spend too much time online keeping them from other activities that can enrich their lives.
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Contact_FullName: Cheri Annis
Contact_Email: poohmom@attbi.com
thesis: Submit Exercise
1a:
Because the use of email is so valuable, it is required for some classes.
2a:
Exploring the idea for school reorganization is very exciting.
3a:
Computers are vital to helping students learn in school.
4a:
It is important for students to understand how to use computers as a learning tool.
5a:
Using the Internet for communication is more common today than it was five years ago.
6a:
Watching television is a bad habit, one that is not encouraged. Maybe “should not be encouraged.
7a:
MTV is popular with teens, but the adult content is not popular with parents.
7b:
Many people who enjoy watching the X-Files also enjoy Star Trek.
8a:
correct
9a:
It is important to understand how vital email will be to communication in the future.
10a:
Children who use the Internet do not get enough exercise, therby causing great risk to their health.
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Contact_FullName: Kedric D. Jackson
Contact_Email: k_kjackson@hotmail.com
thesis: Submit Exercise
1a:
Email writing is required in today's academic classes.
2a:
The topic for school reorganization is a good idea.
3a:
It is a concrete idea to write about computers and the school.
4a:
Learning about computers will be important for any student.
5a:
Internet use is common today compared to five years ago.
6a:
Watching television maybe negative; therefore, it must not be encouraged.
7a:
Most teens find MTV popular.
7b:
Many people watch the X-files.
8a:
Learning email use is important and necessary for most students.
9a:
Email is important; therefore, this paper will inform the reader of its importance.
10a:
Acute Psychological problems may accure if children are allowed the use of the internet.
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Contact_FullName:
Contact_Email:
thesis: Submit Exercise
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Contact_FullName: Amy Lanes
Contact_Email: pemster@msn.com
thesis: Submit Exercise
1a:
2a:
The School needs reorganization.
3a:
Computers in school are very important.
4a:
Understanding computers is very important for students.
5a:
6a:
Watching television should not be encouraged by anyone.
7a:
MTV is popular with teens.
7b:
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9a:
Email is very important to many people.
10a:
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Contact_FullName: Carrie Four Bear
Contact_Email:
10a:
1a:
Writing email should be required for some classes.
2a:
If you like this idea for school reorganization, you should like my topic.
3a:
I should write about computers and school.
4a:
Understanding computers should be important for students.
5a:
6a:
Watching television shouldn't be encouraged by anyone.
7a:
MTV should be popular with some teens.
7b:
Many people should watch X-Files.
8a:
Knowing how to use email should be important and necessary to the modern student.
9a:
The purpose of this paper should be to inform the reader about how important email is.
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Contact_FullName: Tatyana Lysenko
Contact_Email: tanushaL23@hotmail.com
10a:
1a:
Writing email should be required for all classes.
2a:
People like the idea for school reorganization, and should read a paper about it.
3a:
We all must understand how computers are important in today's schools.
4a:
All students should have an understanding of computers.
5a:
Schools have teach students how to use the internet, because it is common today.
6a:
Watching television is a waste of time and shouln't be encouraged by anyone.
7a:
MTV is a most popular television station among teenagers today.
7b:
X-Files is watched only by stupid people.
8a:
The knowlege of how to use email should be necessary to the modern student, as that help students achieve success.
9a:
Email should be seen as the greatest tool for students.
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Contact_FullName: Jenna Norman
Contact_Email: skeetgirl@juno.com
10a:
1a:
Writing email should be required for some classes.
2a:
The school system should be reorganized to better the education of future generations.
3a:
Computers should be important to every student in school.
4a:
Understanding computers should be important for students.
5a:
Using the Internet is more common today than it was five years ago.
6a:
Watching television should not be encouraged by anyone.
7a:
MTV must be popular with some teens.
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Ratings show that X-Files must be watched by many people.
8a:
Knowing how to use email should be important and necessary to the modern student.
9a:
Email aids in communication and should be important to many people.
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Contact_FullName: Traci Olsen
Contact_Email: olsenfarm@aol.com
10a:
1a:
The use of email should be a requirement for all college level classes.
2a:
School reorginization is a facinating subject.
3a:
The use of computers in schools is a concern for all.
4a:
Understanding computers and how to use them is required to do well in school.
5a:
Everyone uses the internet today.
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Television should be banned.
7a:
All teens watch and enjoy MTV.
7b:
Too many people watch X-Files.
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Reading is as essential to life as eating and breating.
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Contact_FullName: Traci Olsen
Contact_Email: Olsenfarm@aol.com
10a:
1a:
Writing email should be required for all classes.
2a:
School reorganization is a very interesting subject.
3a:
School computers should be a concern for everyone.
4a:
Understanding computers is required to do well in school.
5a:
Everyone uses the internet today.
6a:
Television should be banned.
7a:
All teens like MTV.
7b:
Eveyone watches x-files.
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Reading is the most essential element of success.
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Contact_FullName: richard lafountain
Contact_Email: richardlafountain@yahoo.com
10a:
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Chatting online is a modern form of communication. Yes
2a:
Learning to study online can be frustrating but exciting. Yes
3a:
I am going to talk about learning a chat program. No
4a:
Netscape is a browser used for online classes. Yes
5a:
Students should use Internet Explorer for online classes as it is the easiest to use of all the browsers. Yes
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If Students don't use norton connect in online classes, they will be sorry. No
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Different software causes different problems. Yes
7b:
Knowing how to use different software will help students become more proficient in their computer abilities. Yes
8a:
Taking online classes can give a student credit. Yes
9a:
Take online classes as they make you happy, and you work so much. Yes
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Contact_FullName: richard lafountain
Contact_Email: richardlafountain@yahoo.com
10a:
1a:
Chatting online is a modern form of communication. Yes
2a:
Learning to study online can be frustrating but exciting. Yes
3a:
I am going to talk about learning a chat program. No
4a:
Netscape is a browser used for online classes. Yes
5a:
Students should use Internet Explorer for online classes as it is the easiest to use of all the browsers. Yes
6a:
If Students don't use norton connect in online classes, they will be sorry. No
7a:
Different software causes different problems. Yes
7b:
Knowing how to use different software will help students become more proficient in their computer abilities. Yes
8a:
Taking online classes can give a student credit. Yes
9a:
Take online classes as they make you happy, and you work so much. Yes
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- Contact_FullName:
- Vera Chosenko
- Contact_Email:
- verach@comcast.net
- Date:
- 10/10/2005
1a
Writing email is required only for some classes, since most classes meet daily.
2a
Computers are an important part of school and should be used by schools.
3a
Family is an important part of a student’s life.
4a
Students have to use computers all the time and understanding them is important.
5a
Use of Internet in college is very common and it should be thought in college.
6a
Television is very influential and shouldn’t be encouraged by anyone.
7a
GOOD THESIS STATEMENT.
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Many people watch many X-Files.
10a
Email is important for many people.
11a
Children should not use Internet because it is bad for their health, and it doesn’t make kids smarter.
12a
Thesis statements should be part fact but mostly oppinion. It should summerize the whole point of the paper. It is the main idea of the paper.
- Contact_FullName:
- Jeremy Leppert
- Contact_Email:
- jaleppert@hotmail.com
- Date:
- 10/10/2005
1a
Having a valid email address is required for some college classes.
2a
Having access to computers in schools is important.
3a
Family interaction is an important thing for students.
4a
It is important for students today to have a basic knowledge of computers.
5a
Colleges should offer a course on how to use the internet.
6a
Watching too much television is a bad influence on people.
7a
Most teens enjoy watching programs on MTV.
8a
Many people enjoy watching X-Files.
10a
Email is an important thing to have these days.
11a
The internet has a bad influence on a child's health and intelligence.
12a
A thesis statement is an important thing to have in an essay. It generally tells the reader exactly what the essay is going to tell yopu about.It makes it easier to read the essay if you already know what it is about instead of reading it blindly.
- Contact_FullName:
- teinika elmer
- Contact_Email:
- teinika@yahoo.com
- Date:
- 10/08/2005
1a
Writing an email is required for some classes.
2a
If you like discussing about how important computers are for school, than you will like my paper.
3a
I am writing about families and their importance students.
4a
Understanding computers will be important for the students.
5a
Using the Internet is very important to learn in college.
6a
Watching television is unheathly and should not be encouraged by others.
7a
MTV is very popular with teens.
8a
Many people watch X-Fiels
10a
The purpose of the paper is to inform others of the importants of email.
11a
Children can't use the Internet as it may not be heathly for them.
12a
When you finish this exercise, take a few moments and think about the understandings about thsis statments and their relevancs to the essay. there are three or four sentences would be sufficient.
- Contact_FullName:
- Margaret Stalker
- Contact_Email:
- mmstalker63@yahoo.com
- Date:
- 10/07/2005
1a
A working knowlege of how to write and send email is required of some classes.
2a
Computers are important to completing classwork.
3a
Family support is important for students.
4a
Understanding computers is important for students.
5a
Using the internet can be learned in college and must be practiced to become proficient.
6a
Watching television should not be encouraged.
7a
Some segments of the population have made MTV popular.
8a
A large percentage of television viewers watch X-Files.
10a
Email is an important tool.
11a
Children can learn a great deal from the internet with proper guidance.
12a
I am unclear on exactly what I am to do with this. Am I to discuss this with my peer group? No one has responded to previous emails.
My feelings regarding a thesis statement and the relevance to an essay is that the thesis statement leads the reader in the general direction of the essay. The thesis statement gives an overview or general idea of what the paper is saying in general.
- Contact_FullName:
- Contact_Email:
- Date:
- 10/06/2005
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- Contact_FullName:
- April May
- Contact_Email:
- ancientmay@comcast.net
- Date:
- 10/05/2005
1a
English 101 requires writing e-mail.
2a
Computers are an important asset in any school.
3a
Families are of the utmost importance for students.
4a
The most important basic tool for students is understanding computers.
5a
To learn how to use the Internet one need only go to college.
6a
Watching television shouldn't be encouraged by anyone.
7a
MTV is the most popular music television show amoung teens.
8a
X-Files should be watched by all people.
10a
E-mail is extremely important to everyone.
11a
The Internet causes unhealthy habits and does not stimulate the intelect of children.
12a
The thesis helps you and your reader understand your paper and gives it a focus point. It helps keep the writer on track and keeps the peaks the readers interest to keep reading.
- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4for4
- Date:
- 10/04/2005
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- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4for4
- Date:
- 10/04/2005
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- Contact_FullName:
- tanya Haris
- Contact_Email:
- tanyt@kxly.com
- Date:
- 10/04/2005
1a
Writing through e-mail could be useful for some classes
2a
Discussing the importants of computers in school is in my paper.
3a
Writing about families and their importance
4a
Students might understand how important computers are in school
5a
Colleges could be teaching on how to use the internet
6a
Watching TV could be draining on the brain for many people.
7a
Mtv is a popular network for many teens
8a
Many people enjoy watching the show the X-Files
10a
Informing the reader that e-mail could be very important to reader
11a
Children using the internet could come down with heatlth problems
12a
The thesis statement is a guide that directs the reader to the topic of the essay.
- Contact_FullName:
- TANYA HARRIS
- Contact_Email:
- Date:
- 10/04/2005
1a
Email is required for learning in classes.
2a
Computers are in important in classrooms
3a
Writing about families and students is important.
4a
Understanding computers could be important for students
5a
Colleges should teach how to use the internet.
6a
Television watching could be looked at as stupid.
7a
Many teens enjoy watching MTV
8a
Many people should watch X-Files
10a
Email could be very valuable to readers if informed first.
11a
Children using internet should be aware of materials on the internet.
12a
The thesis statement is to guide the reader through the paper. The thesis sets the tone for the paper.
- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4fpr4
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
1a
no
2a
no
3a
no
4a
yes
5a
no
6a
no
7a
no
8a
no
10a
no
11a
no
12a
I understand a thesis statement to be what leads the reader through the essay. It does not give directions or personal statements but guides. A good thesis will take the reader smoothly, throuh the essay without loosing them or leaving them hanging. It will also keep the writer on course.
- Contact_FullName:
- Contact_Email:
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
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- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4fpr4
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
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no
2a
no
3a
no
4a
yes
5a
no
6a
no
7a
yes
8a
no
10a
no
11a
no
12a
My understanding of thesis statements is that it is not a personal opinion and does not directly speak to what you are intending to do. A thesis is important to an essay I think because it directs the reader and gives them a path to follow. It also keeps the writer on course.
- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4fpr4
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
1a
no
2a
no
3a
no
4a
yes
5a
no
6a
no
7a
yes
8a
no
10a
no
11a
no
12a
My understanding of thesis statements is that it is not a personal opinion and does not directly speak to what you are intending to do. A thesis is important to an essay I think because it directs the reader and gives them a path to follow. It also keeps the writer on course.
- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4fpr4
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
1a
no
2a
no
3a
no
4a
yes
5a
no
6a
no
7a
yes
8a
no
10a
no
11a
no
12a
My understanding of thesis statements is that it is not a personal opinion and does not directly speak to what you are intending to do. A thesis is important to an essay I think because it directs the reader and gives them a path to follow.
- Contact_FullName:
- LaTisha Taylor
- Contact_Email:
- iminschool07yahoo.com
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
1a
Yes
2a
No
3a
No
4a
No
5a
No
6a
No
7a
Yes
8a
Yes
10a
No
11a
No
12a
Thesis statements are important in essays because it gives the reader an understanding of what the paper will be like. Without a thesis, the reader could get through the paper, but it wouldn't be easy. Using the correct thesis is important; using the wrong thesis could confuse the reader when thay read the paper.
- Contact_FullName:
- Loretta Jones-Tensley
- Contact_Email:
- lolo4fpr4
- Date:
- 10/03/2005
1a
no
2a
no
3a
no
4a
yes
5a
no
6a
no
7a
yes
8a
no
10a
no
11a
no
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My understanding of thesis statements is that it not a personal opinion and does not directly spead to what you are intending to do,
- Contact_FullName:
- Amanda M. Jones
- Contact_Email:
- amandaj903@aol.com
- Date:
- 10/02/2005
1a
The use of email for some classes is required when taking an online class.
2a
The use of computers in school is very important.
3a
It is important for successful students to have a supportive family.
4a
The full understanding of computers is important for students.
5a
The use of the Internet should be learned while in college.
6a
The watching of television should not be encouraged by anyone.
7a
MTV is popular with teens.
8a
The television show X-Files is watched by many people.
10a
Email is very important to the computer user.
11a
The use of the internet by children needs to be monitored to make sure that they make healthy choices.
12a
The thesis statement is the most important part of the essay. It sets the stage of the paper and lets the reader know what is to be expected. It grabs the attention and differentiates itself from the other sentences on the page. The thesis, is sometimes difficult to write with the clarity that is expected or required.
- Contact_FullName:
- Contact_Email:
- Date:
- 10/02/2005
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2a
3a
4a
5a
6a
7a
8a
10a
11a
12a