Audience Concerns: Transitions
Transitions are words or phrases that cue the reader of a movement from one idea to the
next. They occur within a paragraph and between them. Since ideas should be written as if
they flow together in some kind of sensible manner, a transition act as a bridge between
the writer's thoughts. If a writer does not use transitions, her writing will often feel
jerky or unorganized. Many times the reader will have to pause and try to figure how one
idea relates to another. This is a problem, as anytime the "flow" of the text is
interrupted there is a danger that the reader will be lost completely.
The most common types of transitional expressions which signal relationships between
ideas:
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| Addition: also, in addition, moreover, and besides, furthermore, equally important, then
finally,
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| Example: for example, for instance, thus, as an illustration, namely, specifically
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| Contrast: but, however, on the other hand, nevertheless, nonetheless, conversely, in
contrast, still , at the same time
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| Comparison: similarly, likewise, in the same way
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| Concession: of course, to be sure, certainly, granted
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| Result: therefore, thus, as a result, so, accordingly
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| Summary: hence, in short, in brief, in summary, in conclusion, finally,
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| Time sequence: first, second, third, next, finally, afterwards, before, soon, later,
meanwhile, subsequently, immediately, eventually, currently
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| Place: in the front, next to, in back of, in the background, adjacent, nearby, in the
distance, near, before
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Other types of transition devices are
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| Pronouns: use pronouns to clearly refer to nouns:
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Mary was such a kidder. She always liked to bring jokes to class.
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| Use of parallel structures and phrases that repeat:
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| Often times he was late to class. Often times he over slept. |
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| Repetition of a few key words. Use synonyms throughout or key words:
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Transitions are the mortar of essays. This cement allows a solid binding
of ideas, which glues one idea to another.
The best way to use transitions between paragraphs is to change the form
of a word of the last sentence of a paragraph, and use it as one of the first words in the
next paragraph. Watch how I use this device here.
Using this type of bridge will help in organizing your essays, as
readers will not be aware that a forced transition has been implemented; they will just
think that the ideas have "flowed" together in a rather seamless manner.

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